00:00-00:30 = Perfection!
The sound that you introduce at 00:30 is a bit alien in my opinion, it could be improved by ending it about 0.25 or 0.5 seconds before the note changes to make it a bit sharper, I would also advise turning it down slightly so it doesn't overtake the other sounds - it has more of a "background sound"-esque. The snare too is a bit airy, but it could easily be fixed by adding another less airy snare and having them play at the same time to have a two-layer snare sound.
Now, I have to talk about the drop.
1) The first thing is the short build up before the drop should always be a lot quieter than the drop itself,s o that the drop hits hard.
2) Secondly the drums actually seem a bit "Lacking" after 00:44, where they should be harder than the drums before that point.
3) I see what you were attempting to do at the drop with the wobble bass-like sound, but you need it to wobble at a higher frequency and maybe add a background growl and some screeches to give it an "epic" feel.
4) Lastly the ending was perfect...BUT it should transition to that part and get progressively quieter.
All in all I know what you were aiming for here and I can feel the track.
It does need some improving, don't get me wrong, but it really is good, and with a little adjustments it is a track I could really connect with. I really do love the sounds.
Anyway, great track and good-luck on future ones.
Regards,
N7k.